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Wellfleet, Cape Cod
Lionesses do almost all of the hunting. They creep stealthily through vegetation and leap upon their unsuspecting prey.
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That frantic time we found the children
in a sweet-smelling heap in the dune grass
sprawled and vulnerable, the oldest one dozy,
they younger two deeply asleep after
an idyllic July afternoon, how tenderly
you untangled them, lifting the boy
to your shoulders, cupping the girl
in your arms as I whispered the eldest awake
and we formed a silent procession
back to the little cottage.
Of course the lioness would have eaten the children
if she found them huddled asleep on the veldt
all but invisible in the tall grasses while
we searched for them calling and calling…
Instead, all five settled at sundown, I poured
the wine, you pried open the oysters
we had wrenched from the rocks at low tide
not knowing the children had gone missing.
At midnight I saw the lioness. Her eyes were
two little green moons shining in the darkness.
Response to “Wellfleet, Cape Cod”
Note: Don’t read this until you’ve pondered the poem a bit on your own! There is no such thing as a correct response, and yours may be quite different!
There’s nothing like a vacation day when you’re a child, when the day seems to go on forever and you feel like the world is yours.
As parents, it’s also nice to be in a place where your normal responsibilities loom less large, and the adults get time for a little recreation too.
But nature is not a benevolent place, and if we let our guard down for a second, someone is always there, waiting to pounce.
Just as the speaker spends the afternoon oysters “wrenched from rocks”, (their home, remember), the “lioness” waits to snatch their children. There are no literal lionesses on Cape Cod; in this case the darkness brings possible danger and fear…the “two little green moons”, which are beautiful, also show that night has fallen, leaving the children in danger of being lost, at least until morning, and exposed.
There is a contrast between the parents in the poem, searching and protecting their young, and the lioness, which the epigraph informs us is almost always the hunter for the family, and human family…although they are also hunters (oysters). We are all a part of a cycle of killing to nurture and nurturing by killing.
Although lions and tigers are two different animals, the imagery in this poem makes me think of William Blake’s “The Tyger”, which you remember comes from Songs of Experience, and the image of the children sleeping in the grass evokes its contrasting poem in Songs of Innocence, “The Lamb” (free downloads from Project Gutenberg of Songs of Innocence and Songs of Experience.
I have lived in a coastal community most of my live, and over the years I remember people dying at the beach, including children, from dangers such as rip currents and as fantastical as it might sound, shark attacks. These deaths usually happen from what I call the “Disneyland Effect”, when people lose sight of nature as a place that hides danger in its scenery and recreational possibilities and ignore both common sense and the warnings that our local authorities actually do clearly post.
Nature is not there to be our play land, and we should take a lesson from the animals and remember to always respect it.
Find “Wellfleet, Cape Cod” and more in Maxine Kumin’s collection, And Short the Season
About Maxine Kumin and links to more of her poems.